3．游学活动结束后到你家做客，进一步体验中国的生活方式

【答案】

Dear Tom，

I am writing to invite you and your classmates to China to the study tour on behalf of our school. Indeed, I want to see you very much.

Our school will prepare some tour study activities. At first, we will attend the public speech in Tian’an Men. After that, we will interview some top students in Tsinghua and Beijing University, who will provide some experienced and effective learning methods. What’s more, you will be shown around the Great Wall, which is one of the worldwide wonders. During the study tour, you will carry on some city tasks.

After the study tour, I will invite you to my home, experiencing further Chinese lifestyle. I sincerely hope you will have a better understanding of Chinese culture from the study tour.

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

【解析】

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