)的调查活动，调查结果如下表

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm a student in Senior Two. We have made a survey — "Whom do you turn to when in trouble?" Here are the results.

Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. They're almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can' t get on well with others. They have few friends.

In my opinion, when in trouble we' d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信类，根据提示信息来阐述调查的结果，并表明自己的观点，一定要明确立场，言之有理即可。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑递进关系来写。本文写作时可以按照三类观点来进行介绍。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如一般将来时Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends。时间状语从句when in trouble。As引导的原因状语从句as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much。被动语态They can be trusted by these students.固定句型we would better do sth, we' d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help。此外，文章还使用了大量短语ask for their help、rich experience. get on well with others.等，连接词In my opinion使语言更加连贯。