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假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节

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假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节

【题目】假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：

1.  出发及返回时间；

2.  活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

注意：

1.  词数100左右；

2.   可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.   结语已为你写好。

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 Looking forward to your reply.

 

【答案】

Dear Lucy,

How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.

Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision. Best wishes,

Yours,                                                                   LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】文本结构紧凑，层次分明We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us, for a visit to, make dumplings等。

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