假如你们学校将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论

【答案】

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we'd better have meals at a regular time and proper amount.

If we get into good habits of eating meals, it will benefit us a lot. In addition, good eating habits can protect us from all kinds of illnesses.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. After all,  health is the most important in our life. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That's all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇发言稿，实际是一篇话题作文，要求根据所给题目写一篇表达自己观点的作文。注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读题目所给要求，注意题目中表格里列出的观点；2. 不要漏掉题目所给的内容，注意增加细节，适时表达自己的观点；3.运用多种句型，适当运用一些高级词汇，给文章增色。

【亮点说明】文章语气恰当，无低级错误，文笔流畅，层次分明，运用了高级句式。如 Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much.是一句排比句，增加了发言稿的气势。同时词汇丰富，如proper amounts of 适当的数量， do harm to危害，get into养成。连接词However，Therefore，Besides，In addition，After all的使用使得文章条理清晰，结构顺畅。并且在最后一段以In my opinion引出并表达了自己的观点。