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注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

【题目】假如你是某高三学生李华，你在网上看到一张环卫工人(dustman)在路边树下打点滴(be on a drip)的照片，被他带病工作的精神深深感动。请你用英语给某英文报的编辑写一封信，描述照片内容并发表自己的感想。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear editor,

This morning when I was surfing the internet,

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Yours,

Lihua

 

【答案】

Dear editor,

This morning while I was surfing the Internet, a photo caught my attention. In the photo there was a dustman who was on a drip under a tree by the roadside. It turned out that he insisted on working despite illness. Anyone seeing this would be deeply touched.

We must admit that dustmen like him are doing tiring work for long hours but usually get low pay. However, it is all because of their hard work that we can live and work in a clean environment. Therefore, they deserve our respect.

Then what can we do in return for their hard work? Actually it is very simple --- care for our environment and don’t leave rubbish everywhere, especially in public places.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：书信是近年来比较喜欢出现在英语书面表达中的一种形式，遇到这类作文题时，首先要认真除按摩所给的主题思想，不要误解提纲的意思，更不要偏题跑题；其次要注意语句通顺，结构要完整，不能出现语法错误，单词拼写错误等问题，同时还要多用一些长难句来增加作文的亮点。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：insist on坚持，get low pay低收入，in return 作为回报，who was on a drip under a tree by the roadside定语从句，It turned out that he insisted on working despite illness.避免了头重脚轻，We must admit that dustmen like him are doing tiring work for long hours but usually get low pay.that引导的定语从句。文章使用了过度性的连接词however，therefore，then等，使得文章条理清晰明了。

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