书面表达如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法

【答案】

This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it.

【解析】

试题分析：如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题，自己对于该引语的理解；第二段写出自己的相关经历；第三段恰当地结尾。2. 时态：自己的相关经历用一般过去时；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：was about to快要，give up放弃，better and better越来越好，be able to能够，lost heart灰心丧气，succeed in成功，tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged宾语从句，So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it倒装句，I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.这里含有一个时间状语从句，What's important is that we should stick at it.这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。文章还运用了However，Worse still等词来连接全文。