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2. 产生坏心情的原因

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2. 产生坏心情的原因

【题目】书面表达

学校即将举行以“Turning a Bad Mood(心情)into a Good One ”为题目的英语作文比赛,请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的文章。

1. 好心情的重要性。 2. 产生坏心情的原因。 3. 应该如何调整心情。

 

【答案】

Turning a Bad Mood into a Good One

It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most importantly, you will have an optimistic effect on the people around you. We all will live a harmonious and happy life. It is also good for your health.

However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible.

As we all know, everything has its two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by. Remember: Only you can make yourself happy. I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!

【解析】

试题分析:学校即将举行以“Turning a Bad Mood(心情)into a Good One ”为题目的英语作文比赛,请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的文章。1. 好心情的重要性2.产生坏心情的原因。 3. 应该如何调整心情。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. It作形式主语,动词不定式复合结构做真正的主语;If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world.条件状语从句在句中出现;Most importantly, you will have an optimistic effect on the people around you.句中使用副词最高级;However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something, you may have a bad mood.句中运用时间状语从句;If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible.省略句在句中出现;As we all know, everything has its two sides. As引导非限制性定语从句;We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by.宾语从句运用得体。

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