90后出生的学生，思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧

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Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.

Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which have raised people’s concern. They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. Besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.

However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. In addition, we are quick-minded and creative. We can do our work more efficiently. Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced.

Please do trust us!

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于演讲稿，根据所给信息和观点来行文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关信息，明确有要点。2、根据所给信息和观点进行分析、构思和想象，文章要富有感染力。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.动词ing作状语和定语从句we are developing our special manners and values, which have raised people’s concern.和They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.是非限制性定语从句，还有表语从句this is what it takes to do any job well；They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.是宾语从句，同位语从句和非限制性定语从句的结合等。此外，文章还使用了大量短语Living in , full of , be faced with, Under these circumstances, cooperate with等。以及副词besides, However, Firstly, In addition, Yet,等的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。