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注意：1. 词数120左右.2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

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注意：1. 词数120左右.2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

【题目】你校正在举办英语周活动，你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点：

1. 有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等；

2. 你的感悟。

注意：1. 词数120左右.

2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone!

It’s a great honor to be here and share something with you.

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【答案】

Good morning, everybody!

It's a great honour to be here and share something with you. I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school. At that time, my best friend came up and asked me to go to the playground. “You're always the best in my heart，” she comforted me. “There is always a road ahead.” Strangely, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed before. I felt much better.

Sharing is part of beauty. Just as a Swedish proverb goes, “Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” Sharing can broaden our horizons. As for me, by doing this, I live a happier and more confident life.

Thanks for your attention!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：It's a great honour todo sth.、share something with、come up、live a happier and more confident life等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：at that time、strangely等，使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时，时态做到使用准确。

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